अपने दोस्तों से मिलने का Time नहीं,
पर Facebook पर "comment" करने का वक़्त है,
CTC सबका minimum 6 digit p.a. है,
पर गोलगप्पे के पैसे देने में हालत ख़स्त है,
सोचो तो ये सारे बहाने ,
लगता है यार, हद हैं.
DTC की बस की भीड़ में निकलती जान है,
पर disc के crowd में सभी मस्त हैं.
Office में बैठ कर "green tea" लेनी है,
पर किसी की Treat पे तो "लस्सी/beer" ही ज़बरदस्त है.
सोचो तो ये सारे बहाने ,
लगता है यार, हद हैं.दूसरो का jaundice/typhoid भी छोटा है,
पर अपनी ख़ासी तो "I am allergic to dust" है,
मांगने के लिए भगवान से १०० करोड़ wishes हैं,
पर पूरी होने पर, प्रशाद के लिए १०० रूपए भी जेब पस्त है.
सोचो तो ये सारे बहाने ,
लगता है यार, हद हैं.साला, जिस थाली में खाते हैं, उसी में छेद करते हैं,
और "Best Friends" कहकर, पीछे bitching से तोड़ते trust हैं.
इंसानियत के नाते, इन्सान नहीं हैं,
पर पहेंनते "Being Human" की टीशर्ट हैं.
सोचो तो ये सारे बहाने ,
लगता है यार, हद हैं.
यार हम connected all the time हैं,
पर दिल के connections कहीं lost हैं,
I hope with VoIP & 3G,
हमारे networks थोड़े और strong हो,
Relationships better और "Friend list" थोड़ी और long हो,
और इस wireless ज़माने में,
हमारे "loved ones" हम से हमेशा wired हो!
देख़े तो लगें , कि ये सारे नज़ारे,
यार इनमें, सच्चाई... बेहद है !!
सप्रेम,
अनन्या श्री
सप्रेम,
अनन्या श्री
WOW YAAR HINDI MEIN BHIIIII U CONTINUEEEE TO IMPRESSS AGAIN.U R JUST SUPERBBBBB GUD GOINNNNNNNNNN
ReplyDeletehey thanks.. actually it's hinglish...
ReplyDeleteBut more of a regularly wat i see and feel...so penned it, as i wud say it..:)
thanks Hermon...:))
full of humor n nicely penned down, really enjoyed reading it. great going..
ReplyDeleteSo true and nicely illustrated.It relates to our everyday experiences so the message reaches all in a powerful way. Keep writing......Well done.
ReplyDeleteAbha mausi
Yaar tumhari ye poem to reality check hai :)....very good, you are doing a good job :)
ReplyDeletehey mausi :)).. thank u..
ReplyDeletedont worry ill keep going!!
Fresh and Contemporary style of writing with a perfect blend of the same age old events/thoughts correlated with lives of generation Y living life through projections of facebook and t shirts
ReplyDeleteHaddd hai!!!!.......tooo Goood
Saumya... mwah thanks..since i have no other JOB now..i need to continue wid this.
ReplyDeleteDJ, thank u thank u ji...happy to know u liked it.
i ve tried to infuse all the things that touch us.. and ve tried to show the veiled hypocrisy.
kkool..
ReplyDeletethank u for ur comments..
hop on more if u like it.
n do we knw each other??
finally the wait has come to an end...boht sahi..vadhiyaa ji...u have surfaced the reality in a hilarious way...grt work...though ur poem leaves a gud message in the end, but overall it is funny...keep exploding like this...one more thing.. ur poem has reminded me off one of my friends... :)
ReplyDeleteits so so amasing :)ideas are the same old ones...but presentation awesome :) kudos :)
ReplyDeleteobservation beautifully molded to words.. awesome!!
ReplyDeleteWaah ! Waah !! Kyyaa Khoob Asaliyat Bayaan Kii Hai !!! Shaabaash !!!
ReplyDeleteDear Ananya,
ReplyDeleteSimply loved the poem. How reality is affecting your innocence and your questioning or introspecting the same is a difficult thought to write upon. You have done a decent job in putting it in simple words yet not losing the plot. The metaphors may not all apply to one and all, yet every one may draw a parallel or two from the scenes you have tried to create using those metaphors. Like FB, Beer etc. Get a Hindi to English and vice-versa dictionary, it will help you add more poetic words in your lines.
Now, looking forward to your blog, all the more.
As always, keep it simple, silly :P
Thank u nani...:)) hindi ki galtiyon ko thoda nazar andaz kar dijiyega..
ReplyDeleteNitin...thank u:)).. which fren??.. well, i wil try to keep on exploding wid ideas..
Pathik..thanks so much..yup evrythin isnt for everyone..agreed, but a generalized sketch of all.
Ana - hope to keep u all entertained..:)
Super duper like...................wow..Ananya.... too good.. love it !!
ReplyDeleteVery true written ..bahut din baad hindi pad ke bahut achha laga..Jai hind!
ReplyDeleteNice thought provoking thoughts..
ReplyDeleteSahil
its verrrry goood!!!!!!!! and in just the language or shud i say lingo :P that makes it even more crisp!!!!!!!!!!! damn goood! :)
ReplyDeletemay be not, but i do follow your blog...just to let u know i am not any kind of "secret admirer" also.
ReplyDeletehmmm
ReplyDeleteseems like a great hit already, your blog!
Awesome ana :)
awesome di... zabardast likha hai and very close to our real life situations... looking forward to more such stuff on this blog !!!
ReplyDeletethanks Vidhu :)
DeleteI hope so too...