It is not important to fight each battle,
It is important to choose the right one to fight.
Because every day I win in an everyday battle,
But the victory is insignificant.
I sit back and ponder,
About the larger war that awaits me.
But in the hustle of each day,
I only fight the mere pawns.
Then I realize and wonder,
That I might be the king in my small world,
But in the big world outside,
Even I am a mere pawn.
But this has to change,
And I will bring it.
I will be the one to call out Checkmate,
Be the ruler - the king,
And fight and win the right wars,
Because JUST winning isn’t everything.
Success doesnt' always come to stronger and faster man
ReplyDeleteYou will be successful if you think you can
I am sure you know that you can and you will.....loved the ending.Its not always about winning, its about winning doing the right thing at the right time, in the right way and among right people....Keep going with the same will and tenacity, and you will never pause to make an end....Beautiful painting of words.....Congratulations
I could so relate to the train of thoughts. Everyone - every ambitious person - goes through this situation someday. Thanks for putting them here so well. Keep writing!
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@Robin: thanks... sometimes,somethings jus make u write the right thing...n I somehow had been feeling this for quite some days. M feeling slightly better after writing it down.
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@Digvijay: yes, i hope i keep writing regularly. happy to know, this poem brings a sense of connection for some people.
ReplyDeleteTHATS WAT I AM TALKINGGGG ABOUT.just too good and i think u can publish a book of ur works nw.and keep da gud job upppp.
ReplyDeleteNice work Ana ... Someday everyone have to realise it hw they can achive d highest in their field, if they succeed, they will recorganised as a Czar else you know .....
ReplyDeleteHats of to you for such a nice work ...
@Rahul: hahha.. the book cant have jus ten pages... :)).. but ues i will continue to write.. n frequently.. the fool that i am...:) thanks for pushing me,... :))
ReplyDelete@Akshay: thats akshay jain na??? thanks yar.. gud to knw u guys read my poems to. hope we all achieve r dreams...:)
fool?no way u r a genius u write from ur heart and dats da best thng bout uuuuu and dnt worry ill always be around for pushing u wenever u need it
ReplyDeleteSo here it begins:
ReplyDeleteYou have a natural flow, so that's an asset as a poet. Good!
I can get your thoughts, and understand the feeling pretty well.
Now, without being too critical, some suggestions:
1. We all know you are a good writer, but then three paras are just not enough to involve a person to the core. It's my opinion, and I believe, you should try and build more paras around the plot. Write and connect with as many patterns, elements, which can bring out your point.
2. The last line, written stand alone, hmmm, again, can be integrated. I mean why comment on your own poem :)
Learning from you, and hope to see you do very well :)
Pathik
Asset :))
ReplyDelete1). i know wat u mean, it is slightly shallow, but i wanted to keep this one short.
2). the last line is a part of the poem only..
yes, from next time onwards ill bring in my POV and explain it better. thank u so much.. Mr. Editor...
will keep ur suggestions in my mind.